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Post by HAYASHIDAICHI on May 10, 2011 22:52:43 GMT -5
:Daichi Hayashi : AGE: 13 D.O.B.: May 10, 1998 GENDER: Male HEIGHT: 5’8” WEIGHT: 153 VILLAGE: Leaf Village NINJA RANK: Genin
STRENGTHS: - Good control of Chakra. - Adept with weapons. - Learns quickly.
WEAKNESSES: - He succumbs to anger easily. - Low Chakra stamina. - Prideful
Dark black hair that appears blue, hazel eyes, slender build. Daishi wears a black long sleeved hoodie, he has red silk ribbons hanging from his wrist, which bear the characters of his name in gold. The ribbons are kite shaped. He wears his shinobi head band around his left bicep.
PERSONALITY: Daichi is a quiet person, but he enjoys being with people. He enjoys missions involving stealth. He is a kind person, but can be quick to anger, because he is prideful. Some people find Daichi cold, but he is far from it, he has just mellowed down since Kato vanished from his life. Daichi cannot stand to be mocked, he finds it annoying and childish. He tries his best to be helpful to others, especially younger students at the academy.
Daichi enjoys art, but he is not a talented artist. He especially loves nature paintings. Daichi is not very expressive about his emotions, he tends to keep those things to himself. He is not shy, but he doesn't just chatter all the time. Daichi does get angry quickly, but he tries his hardest to help his allies.
LIKES: - Eating with chopsticks. - Stealth missions. - Practicing with weaponry
DISLIKES: - The Hyuuga clan. He finds them shallow and far too cold. - Genjutsu. He has trouble seeing through the guise, and is often tricked easily. - Mornings. He tends to stay up late in the night, he finds that he can think clearly at night.
TECHNIQUES: Pain Switch Jutsu- A Genjutsu technique that swaps his current level of pain with his foe.
Secret Fist Jutsu- A Ninjutsu that causes areas of high pressure in the air, which he can manipulate like fists. This requires lots of concentration to sustain though, and therefore is hardly effective in a close range fight.
Taijutsu: He is able to fight by attacking nerve points and muscles, not Chakra points, by doing so he can cause damage to muscles and even make his foe pass out. He developed this ability by constantly studying the human body and inflicting the techniques on himself.
Bunshin no Jutsu (Clone Technique) Rank: E Type: Supplementary Range: - A basica Ninjutsu technique taught to all Academy students that uses chakra to create substanceless clones of the caster. Unlike the more advanced bunshin (such as Mizu Bunshin or Kage bunshin) these clones are unable to attack because they have no physical substance. After performing a number of hand seals, a group of the desired number of clones will be created with a small 'poof' of smoke. Because they are substanceless, following complex commands won't work - thought they can make the appearence of an attack, but nothing will happen. If they come into contac with anything with physical substance the clones vanish with a 'poof' of smoke. The primary use of these clones is to confuse the target and create an opening to attack.
Henge no Jutsu (Transformation Technique) Rank: E Type: Supplementary Range: - Description: A basic Ninjutsu technique taught to all academy students that allows the caster to take on the appearence of a object or person. Those using the technique have to detailed with their transformations otherwise they can be revealed with the most subtle flaws. This jutsu only gives the caster the appearence of the not the personality or jutsu or etc of the target. So, another way to be discovered is through wrong personality and habbits. Caster cannot transform into giant beheamoth sized creatures or to something as small as a insect.
Kawarimi no Jutsu (Change of Body Stance Technique) Rank: E Type: Supplementary Range: Close to Far A basic Ninjutsu technique taught to all Academy students that allows the caster to replace themselves with an object near by or a clone with physical substance to allow them to avoid dangerous attack and get away unharmed. Before the opponent’s attack connects, the user quickly replaces themselves with an objects or clone – at first giving the illusion that the attack connected – but the object to clone will then break or vanish. This technique does not stop Genjutsu attacks – so the user cannot replace a log to take a genjutsu attack for them. Replacing oneself gives the user the opportunity to ambush, plan strategy or make an esacape.
Kinobori no Waza (Act of Tree Climbing) Rank: E Type: Supplementary Range: - This technique requires adequate chakra control from the Ninja in order to execute. The shinobi will concentrate Chakra their feet and keep a constant flow going. While keeping this steady flow of chakra, the user will be able to walk up and on solid surfaces that he normally couldn’t have because of gravity. The user will now be able to walk up walls, trees, walk on ceilings upside down, etc. It is possible to keep his going while in combat, but if concentration is broken – the nin will fall.
Nawanuke no Jutsu (Escaping Technique) Rank: E Type: Supplementary Range: - A basic technique taught to Academy students that allows the shinobi to escape from the bindings of rope and such. As it is a basic ability, it will allow allow escape from simple knots and ties and bindings – not something created from a jutsu that binds.
Kakuremino no Jutsu (Magic Cloak of Invisibility Technique) Rank: E Type: Supplementary Range: - A simple Ninjutsu technique taught to all Academy students that requires the use of a pre-made cloak or cloth. Using the cloak, the shinobi will blend themselves into their background – keeping perfectly still and silent; as well as precise position of the cloak is necessary to remain undiscovered.
Suimen Hokou no Waza (Act of Water Surface Walking) Rank: D Type: Supplementary Range: - This technique requires adequate chakra control from the Ninja in order to execute. The shinobi will concentrate Chakra their feet and keep a constant flow going. While keeping this steady flow of chakra, the user will be able to walk on water. It is possible to kept his going while in combat, but if concentration is broken – the nin will fall into the water.
Doton no Jutsu (Earth Release Technique) Rank: D Type: Supplementary Range: - A simple Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element that is common to Ninja in any village. Using their chakra – the shinobi can enter the underground to hide, ambush or spy on an enemy. Because they are underground – the user will not be able to breathe making their time under very limited. Some ninja to stay for extended periods will create small air pockets or use a tube to breathe with. Being a very useful way to avoid attack – this attack puts the ground between the attack but the user is now susceptible to Doton attacks.
Shunshin no Jutsu (Body Flicker Technique) Rank: D Type: Supplementary. Range: Short to Far A higher leveled technique that allows the Shinobi to move from one location to another almost instantaneously. The vanishing and reappearing of the caster depends on their speed. The technique is masked by surrounding leaves, sand, mist, etc – depends on what is available at the time. Technique isn’t battle oriented but could assist in tight situations where there is time to execute the jutsu successfully.
WEAPONS: Shuriken Kunai Knife Surujin- A weapon that has smooth river stones tied to a length of rope. Hidden Wire- The wire that is hard to see. (I don’t remember what it is called in the TV show! Sorry!) HISTORY: Daichi was raised in the Leaf Village by a woman he only knew as Kato. She always said for Daichi to call her sister, but Daichi knew they weren’t related. She had brown eyes and her hair was blond. She provided for Daichi and trained him in the functions of the human body, teaching him all about nerve points and muscles. One day, Daichi came home and found a note. It was in rushed hand writing, and all it said was to watch for the white horse.
He spent days trying to find some evidence of who this man could be. He constantly searched the apartment for anything he could have left, but he never found anything. He did not know of any other family members except his "Sister", so he had no one to go to.
Now, on his own, he knew all he could do was finish his training and become a Genin. Whenever Kato disappeared, he still had a year left at the academy. He spent this year learning how to become self sufficient. He learned to survive without Kato, but that didn't make him any less lonely. With a heavy heart, he finished his Genin training.
DESIRED PLOT: Daichi is being hunted down by a man who rides a white horse. He is not sure of the reason, but he thinks it is because of his extensive knowledge of anatomy, taught to him by Kato. He will discover that Kato was tortured and killed by the man on the white horse.
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Post by NARUTO UZUMAKI on May 10, 2011 23:05:52 GMT -5
1) personality is a bit short. i'd say it should at least be a paragraph with 7-8 sentences. 2) history is a bit short as well. I'd say 2 paragraphs at least is reasonable for that 3) you left out your description for your character 4) if he went through academy i'd say you should add the academy jutsus. if you need those look at this profile narutorpweb.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=acceptedleafninja&action=display&thread=1388you dont have to add them its ur choice fix that and I'll take a look again. final decision is up to the admin Takara
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Post by TAKARA on May 11, 2011 14:10:32 GMT -5
I agree with Naruto. Try to add some more to his personality. Also, you need to add a description of his appearance or you can just add a picture of your character. You don't need to change this, but 5'8" seems rather tall for a thirteen year old Once those are improved you will be accepted.
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Post by HAYASHIDAICHI on May 11, 2011 21:18:25 GMT -5
Okay! I will continue working on his personality and history, but the description isn't showing up when I post it for some reason!
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Post by HINATA HYUGA on May 11, 2011 22:09:17 GMT -5
Well, Well, you hate my clan :L, me too xD atleast their way of the ninja...anyways, here- I'm a new mod and everything but I would like to point out something...that is maybe not needed but pretty important...gven that your character is a teen and a Genin who should have low chakra reserves:
Secret Fist Jutsu- A Ninjutsu that causes areas of high pressure in the air, which he can manipulate like fists. He is able to fight by attacking nerve points and muscles, not Chakra points, by doing so he can cause damage to muscles and even make his foe pass out. He developed this ability by constantly studying the human body and inflicting the techniques on himself.
Could you flesh out this a little? Like, does he gets tired after using it too much? or does it needs chakra? how much? and you should give it some drawbacks as you're a Genin...Anyways (as Naruto-kun said) the AdminTakara is the one who can choose.
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DASHE STORM
Genin
Life Is What You Make of It[Mo0:0]
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Post by DASHE STORM on May 12, 2011 1:07:21 GMT -5
(OOC: Dashe is me Naruto. srry posted wrong account)
okay thats better everything looks good to me so you get my approval at least. Takara makes the final decision.
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Post by HAYASHIDAICHI on May 12, 2011 1:12:45 GMT -5
Okay! Thank you! And to Hinata, I like you! I just don't really like some of that particular clan! I didn't mean for Hidden Fist Jutsu to be attached to that part, his nerve point fighting is separate now and I labeled it as a taijutsu! Thank you!
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Post by TAKARA on May 12, 2011 17:16:16 GMT -5
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